tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3997051130703759476.post2383227012162785026..comments2023-06-08T01:46:49.960-07:00Comments on Alicia's Blah Blah Blah: Well Blow Me DownAliciahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01897876685747175604noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3997051130703759476.post-1338853988824831842008-08-04T16:38:00.000-07:002008-08-04T16:38:00.000-07:00Found the blog while searching for Yates's “Oh, Jo...Found the blog while searching for Yates's “Oh, Joseph, I’m so tired”.<BR/><BR/>Read Desilu. The three voices, at least in the format it is in, was a bit confusing. But I liked it when I got what it was you were trying to do after reading your explanation at the end. Perhaps some kind of section demarkator would have helped. Its probably there in your original but not the online version at that page.<BR/><BR/>I read Toggling the Switch after that and really loved that story. Nicely written. Far superior to Desilu.Sanjeevhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14503892343682253668noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3997051130703759476.post-90865115775084606402008-05-30T09:37:00.000-07:002008-05-30T09:37:00.000-07:00Hey Alicia, I just read the story and it's fabulou...Hey Alicia, <BR/><BR/>I just read the story and it's fabulous! It's such a cool idea and I love the breakneck pace of it. And your sentences totally pack a wallop. Your fiction rocks! Congrats on some well-deserved recognition.Linda Hartleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05706349485332467881noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3997051130703759476.post-15302253492625437082008-05-11T22:32:00.000-07:002008-05-11T22:32:00.000-07:00you are a woman! Great story, LeeshaDebannyou are a woman! <BR/><BR/>Great story, Leesha<BR/><BR/>DebannDeb https://www.blogger.com/profile/12088493275889638547noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3997051130703759476.post-22963517587855667782008-05-06T11:12:00.000-07:002008-05-06T11:12:00.000-07:00Thanks Andy, my one and only!Thanks Andy, my one and only!Aliciahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01897876685747175604noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3997051130703759476.post-13807709456828005842008-05-05T17:27:00.000-07:002008-05-05T17:27:00.000-07:00"... legs like anacondas." Wow. Damn. Great stuff...."... legs like anacondas." Wow. Damn. Great stuff. <BR/><BR/>Congrats, Alicia.Andrew Roehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05587923563922700199noreply@blogger.com